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I am of a disfunctional mind frame,
Maybe this time I will forget...
But i know I won't,
and i'll just stay the same, and you will move on.
You did move on, so what is my problem?

All of a sudden my place shifted into the form another,
But I am not that guy, I struggle to ask why.
I want my place back, I would beg,
What can change your mind?
U must find solice in another kind.

I am of a nervous disposition,
For me its more than a useless competion
Alcohol has failed me, drugs might make me see,
I don't care if its not that clearly,
Don't make me do something stupid... (Seriously)
©2008-2009 ~Beast-Balls
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excellent prose, ben!! :clap:

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"i have a very low tolerance for stupidity."
its not that good dude, its sponaneous and not very well thought through, I havnt wrote in a while and theres been some havy weight on me the past few weeks it sucks, how r u doin anyways?

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i think the abstract thoughts in your piece is what i liked -- it mirrored my own thinking process sometimes (the way thoughts seem to merge and overlap, strung together...). what's goin on wiv ya, pal?

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"i have a very low tolerance for stupidity."

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